Kalliak Cayden Halo (Finished!!)

[Kalliak C. Halo]

I T ' S A P L E A S U R E T O M E E T Y O U ,
Kalliak Cayden Halo

AGE17
SEXUALITY Bisexual
SPECIES Aristocat Vampire
PLAY BY Unknown source

LOVES
· One- Archery
· Two- Horse Riding
· Three- Animal/ Human Blood

LOATHES
· One- HORSE blood
· Two- Humans
· Three- Smart People

THE GOOD
· One- Friendly
· Two- Smart
· Three- Shadow Huntress

THE BAD
· One- Bloodlust
· Two- Blood Hungery
· Three- Ignorant

appearances can be deceiving

S O I T O O K O F F M Y M A S K ,

· PROFILE
Kalliak is very sexy and sexual. She holds herself tall and proud only to draw in more people. She has long wavy hair. It starts from red and goes down to a light orange as is reaches down to her knees. She has red eyes which in the night glow just the slightest pink glow. With her vampireish part she wears all black, white, pink, or purple. But mostly black. She has a nice build and really big breasts. Her legs are fully mustled and her arms are large yet very delicate. Her hands are small yet large. Kalliak has a skinny stomach.
She loves wearing a too small bikini or a t-shirt and short jean shorts. Unless she is school, then she wears a tight v-neck shirt and a pair of jean shorts that reach her finger tips or a knee long dress, or a short dress with leggings underneath.
Kalliak has a strange name. She loves showing off about it and some people claim that when she stands in direct sunlight or right as the sun rises/sets a orange halo appears right over her head. Otherwise she is very beautiful. Kalliak is normally seen with a a purse and a watter bottle. And her cell phone. Or just a back pack with other stuff. Its a sight to see.

· HISTORY)
Kalliak is one of those been there done that people. She has been all over in alaska and some other fun interesting places you don't hear a lot about. In the winter her hair turns white when she is in alaska and greenland. Its kinda cool too hear stories. She can live in cold climates easily. Some people think she is cold blooded because of her living in cold climates. She absolutly loves the school because she can flirt and practically dance her way from every situation. And its not regular dancing either. Its dirty dancing.

· ADDITIONAL)
(I have permission from Jamie to have more than one power. But one big power and two or three smaller ones)
Kalliak's special vampire powers

Large-
Kalliak can control Water and Fire. She can pull water from the air and fire from lava/fireplaces. She can do water best but she must have a sack with water hanging from her side. And fire, she has to have a few hot embers somewhere around her or with her in a fire proof pouch.

Small-
Kalliak has Telekisis. She can move items with her mind. She doesn't do it often in public but at her room she uses it to move things around. Not many people knows she has it.

Small-
Kalliak can talk to animals. She has a Snow White effect. She can understand them and reply back to them. It will appear weird but at the horse stable it will help possibly with other horse items. She can pursuade animals to fight on her side in a fight. She is currently trying to persuade the head master to let her keep a pet (I.e. bird, dog, cat, hampster) in the dorms.

Small-
to be a healer and then a minor bonus with her giving off vibes off emotions to others and change their feelings. Such as if there is a present argument, Kalliak can emanate a happier vibe and thus the people would feel happy. It is not a control of their body and not a true emotion that they feel since you would be manipulating it, so it is possible that they catch on IF they know the power but it can also work to your advantage with enough practice.

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OOC NAME T or Tristy
RP EXPERIENCE 3 years, im not very good
WHERE DID YOU FIND US? Knight Hero

made by TOKY of OTE.

[Miwa Kamiko]

Please do not feel discouraged but in our rules we have currently put a ban on purebloods due to the fact too many people want to be one, and not enough Aristocrats. That is the only needed change so far and if it's caught before you put too much work into the rest, the less upset you will be later to find out. Hope to see this finished soon!

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[Kalliak C. Halo]

Ok I finished it!

[Miwa Kamiko]

There is some interesting potential behind this character but in the mean time, some of the following issues are holding the character back.

Just so you know, the three images at top are to be 100x100 pixels so they don't stretch the board as these ones are :[ If you need help finding a face claim, you may ask one of the staff, especially myself, and I will be more than willing to help.

Also there is a bit confusion with the enjoyment of flying? You had listed that as one of your characters loves but do you mean as in riding planes or she can actually fly? Preferably it would be nice if you avoided the capability of flight since none of the vampires can do that.

You also said that you are a vampire but did not specify. Since purebloods are banned, it is assumed that you fall somewhere in the class of Aristocrats but if you could please add that

There is a minor issue with the idea of being raised by wolves. Although the idea is intriguing, it gives off more of a tarzan vibe and not high-class, elegant, attractive woman that you describe. Between the staff members, it has been decided that it would be best to avoid that and come up with a less uncivilized background. Please still put as much creativity into it and have a fun character, just with parents of the same genetics.

The LAST thing would be that you have a few too many powers. Usually the Aristocrat race has one main power. The super speed and hearing come with the vampire package. Telekinesis is seemingly a pureblood thing and invisibility is a bit drastic since so far other characters have been trying to keep their powers to some extent, scientifically plausible. The idea of being a healer is quite fascinating though and then a minor bonus with your character could be giving off vibes off emotions to others and change their feelings. Such as if there is a present argument, your character could emanate a happier vibe and thus the people would feel happy. It is not a control of their body and not a true emotion that they feel since you would be manipulating it, so it is possible that they catch on IF they know the power but it can also work to your advantage with enough practice. *winkwink*

This is in no way meant to discourage you and I would love to see this character in action. Some more lively and fun characters would be nice and are needed around here. I truly hope to see these changes soon! And I truly hope you don't get offended by this ♥

[Kalliak C. Halo]

Ok I fixed this stuff and yes I do need help with my pictures. Its compilcated....

[Jamie-Munster]

Okay ALMOST there! The only critique I have on the matter is maybe crop back the big power a bit. What I mean is maybe pick one major element and work with that. If I might make a suggestion, I would like to see a Wind elemental, I don't think we have one just yet and that would be cool to see. :] As far as the face claim, just go ahead and contact Miwa and she could help you out I'm sure. ^_^

[Kalliak C. Halo]

Ok so I've fixed this and stuff, so now is it ready to go?

[Kalliak C. Halo]

Ok. Im done now. Can It be accepted?

[Jamie-Munster]